100 wc

YAY! We are going car shopping! But what colour should it be? I want a white convertible  Ferrari with a boot that opens by itself. The car shop is ages away!!! it is such a long drive! It is a 2-minute drive!!! So long right? When we get there a slimy salesman in a suit walks up to us. ” Hey, mates.” calls the man. “Are ya hav’n a good day, mates?” ” Well, I don’t care about your wellbeing just gimme the cash bro.” We were so shocked that we drove straight off and vowed never to get a car again.

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  1. Hi Lachy, I like how started with a great sizzling start and made your story flow really well. Also if you can make the promt word bold.

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